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unburntflame poet poet/mod Life will not kill the dream I dream. Posts: 711	Connection Aug 18, 2003 23:24:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by unburntflame on Aug 18, 2003 23:24:05 GMT -5 hey guys, this is my first go at a tanka, so plz tell me if it's right!!!! luv flame a smile from him i hide my glee inside automatic secret smile a wonderful moment an instantaneous connection
	I can't believe that someone like you would just happen and not be created.

aj Guest	Connection Aug 19, 2003 18:09:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by aj on Aug 19, 2003 18:09:15 GMT -5 Very nice, UBF. I could feel the urgency!

unburntflame poet poet/mod Life will not kill the dream I dream. Posts: 711	Connection Oct 9, 2003 6:01:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by unburntflame on Oct 9, 2003 6:01:56 GMT -5 Thanks AJ.
	I can't believe that someone like you would just happen and not be created.