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Post by Jaysie on Sept 25, 2003 15:48:43 GMT -5
It's weathered trunk warped,
aged beyond recognition.
Youth shines in new blooms
that revisit this old soul.
Although changed, this love remains.
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Post by aj on May 16, 2004 1:51:15 GMT -5
Nice. Hopeful words are nourishing words. Lovely write, Jay.  -AJ |
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Post by Jaysie on Jun 4, 2004 9:28:59 GMT -5
thanks aj! it's been a while since i've written any tanka. maybe i'll get around to it over the weekend...  |
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Post by Debo on Nov 10, 2005 20:58:25 GMT -5
This one captured my heart beacause my Mother-Inlaw and Father-Inlaw
redid an old trunk that Winona (Mother-Inlaw) can remember her mother using every time they moved
And it was tadered but If you could see it now they even put her mothers picture on the inside of the lid. this write warmed my heart.
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