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Rainy poet Poetry warms the heart and saves the soul!!! Posts: 268	Good night Jun 20, 2003 21:55:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rainy on Jun 20, 2003 21:55:26 GMT -5 Blackened sky up high Stars above with moon as sun Sun is now long gone Leaving you so far behind This is my goodbye for now -Kim
	You don't love him becuase he's beautiful, He's beautiful because you love him!!

onemorething mod team Posts: 507	Good night Jun 21, 2003 14:49:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by onemorething on Jun 21, 2003 14:49:02 GMT -5 nice, kim's trying tanka! nice job.

Jaysie poet poet/mod "If I had all the words, I would write myself out of here" Posts: 1,249	Good night Jun 21, 2003 23:07:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jaysie on Jun 21, 2003 23:07:18 GMT -5 Fantastic, Kim! I am so glad you've tried tanka! It is great to read your writes! I love how you compare the sun long gone to the guy long gone. This was a very good job! ;D ;D
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Rainy poet Poetry warms the heart and saves the soul!!! Posts: 268	Good night Jun 23, 2003 0:00:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rainy on Jun 23, 2003 0:00:23 GMT -5 Thanks Jayise and Ken. -Kim
	You don't love him becuase he's beautiful, He's beautiful because you love him!!