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onemorething mod team Posts: 507	no one's home Jun 6, 2003 16:25:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by onemorething on Jun 6, 2003 16:25:44 GMT -5 streets blackened by rain holding to you once again whisper of the storm as it knocks on our window let it think that no one's home

paxia been around the block Posts: 118	no one's home Jun 7, 2003 15:51:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by paxia on Jun 7, 2003 15:51:11 GMT -5 Again, I must say, very clever, onemorething. I like the last line "let it think we are not home" or something to that effect. Cool stuff.
	I know I may scare you and I will probably freak you out But to me this is what living my life is all about I'm not gonna try to be someone who isn't me Don't you people realize, I'm living my life and I am free.

onemorething mod team Posts: 507	no one's home Jun 11, 2003 22:10:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by onemorething on Jun 11, 2003 22:10:50 GMT -5 thanks, jay and pax! your comments are great and much appreciated. -ken

Alexia mod team Posts: 1,026	no one's home Jun 12, 2003 19:34:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alexia on Jun 12, 2003 19:34:21 GMT -5 This was grrrrrrreat......"let it think that no ones home"...wonderful line.......wonderful write.! Really loved this one. Alexia
	Wisdom is just a word. Knowing when to be wise is a power. Understanding when to share wisdom is a gift.

Restless mod team Posts: 579	no one's home Jun 12, 2003 22:50:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Restless on Jun 12, 2003 22:50:33 GMT -5 how romantic! I love it Ken!
	"Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up.....these are the best days of our lives. The only thing that matters is just following your heart, and eventually you will get it right" -Ataris-

onemorething mod team Posts: 507	no one's home Jun 13, 2003 8:59:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by onemorething on Jun 13, 2003 8:59:05 GMT -5 thanks a & r!