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romanticone1983 poet "I think now and then everybody's entitled to too much perfection." -Christian Slater, Bed of Roses Posts: 225	first tanka May 8, 2003 19:48:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by romanticone1983 on May 8, 2003 19:48:46 GMT -5 could someone please tell me if this is good? thanks such beauty is formed by a poem made by we yet a word is more when perfected by even one emotion. it is more

aj Guest	first tanka May 16, 2004 1:11:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by aj on May 16, 2004 1:11:21 GMT -5 Words become more potent with feelings behind them. I agree. -AJ

cutiepie1210 brand, spanking new ThAtS HoT!!!! Posts: 3	first tanka Jan 27, 2005 20:34:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cutiepie1210 on Jan 27, 2005 20:34:24 GMT -5 . you got this one handled!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!