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Post by millilou on Mar 6, 2003 12:40:34 GMT -5
The moment I fear
has come round to haunt me now
piercing my heart and
causing me to cry in pain
for all that can never be
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Post by arynichole on Mar 6, 2003 19:21:24 GMT -5
Now this is really awesome...great.
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Post by millilou on Mar 7, 2003 19:10:56 GMT -5
Thank you very much.  |
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Post by Char on Mar 14, 2003 17:44:38 GMT -5
Very nice Millilou!!! It was a kind of deja vu for me! I'd written a poem back in '72 (am I dating myself??? LOL) when I was a teen. I'll post it on the general site, you'll see what I mean... ;D
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Post by Char on Mar 14, 2003 17:46:12 GMT -5
Sorry.... I meant the All Types site.  |
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Post by millilou on Mar 22, 2003 22:25:00 GMT -5
What the name of your poem? I'll be looking. Thanks a bunch!!!  |
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Post by Char on Mar 23, 2003 18:12:26 GMT -5
Hi Milli The name of my poem is "Lost Heart" and as of today it was on page 8 I believe. Although mine is longer, the ideas are much the same. Hope you like it! Charlene |
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Post by millilou on Mar 23, 2003 20:03:37 GMT -5
Just finished your poem...love it. I'm always amazed
how things can be said in so many different ways. Just look at the poems in the "Storm" contest. Same theme but all completely different. That what I love about poetry...words ARE wonderful, aren't they!!!!
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Post by Char on Mar 24, 2003 18:26:05 GMT -5
Thank You about my poem Lost Heart. Yes, it is amazing at the many different ways that something can be said. I mean lQQk at all the songs that were written? All different but similar. Charlene |
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