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Post by millilou on Mar 4, 2003 19:58:27 GMT -5
Sun dancing on snow
dripping handfuls of diamonds
on the wintry land.
Thus the winter fades away,
always melting into spring.
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Post by aj on Mar 4, 2003 20:13:13 GMT -5
Lovely.
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Post by millilou on Mar 4, 2003 20:37:19 GMT -5
Thanks, this is a fun form to do.
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tinman
just a little green
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Post by tinman on Mar 4, 2003 21:12:05 GMT -5
Although I love Hakiu I've never tried this form. Maybe I'll give it a shot. I really love the way the thoughts flow. Thanks for the good work!
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Post by millilou on Mar 5, 2003 18:24:44 GMT -5
These are as easy as writing haiku, just add two more lines of seven...or a total of 31. Try it, you'll like it. I promise!
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Post by engarde on Mar 5, 2003 22:07:23 GMT -5
Great job! I love the "handfuls of diamonds"
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Post by millilou on Mar 6, 2003 11:29:49 GMT -5
Thanks a bunch!!
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Post by arynichole on Mar 6, 2003 19:19:55 GMT -5
This one is so alive. Love it!  |
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 6, 2003 19:40:52 GMT -5
Great choice of words, love the handful of diamonds. keep up the good work.
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Post by millilou on Mar 7, 2003 19:12:10 GMT -5
Appreiciate all the kind words. Thanks!!!
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