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Post by millilou on Mar 4, 2003 19:44:13 GMT -5
The whispering wind
will howl and scream in protest
as dark shadows fall
but will settle down again
as a new dawn meets the night.
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tinman
just a little green
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Post by tinman on Mar 4, 2003 21:10:20 GMT -5
Most awesomely done...very nice.  |
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Post by arynichole on Mar 5, 2003 18:08:54 GMT -5
A REMARKABLE TANKA...GOOD JOB.
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Post by millilou on Mar 20, 2003 19:36:55 GMT -5
THANKS...Tanka is a fun form. I like it a lot.
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Post by Matt on Mar 22, 2003 19:49:37 GMT -5
Yes!! I also thought very good,
nice, thanks.
Matt
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Post by millilou on Mar 22, 2003 22:25:57 GMT -5
Thank you Matt. I've been enjoying your poetry. Keep up the good work!!!!  |
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