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Post by engarde on Mar 3, 2003 5:34:49 GMT -5
A launch pad for bees,
yellow blossoms of jasmine
do playfully flirt.
Nectar is the promise of
this garden's teasing lady.
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Jasmine
Mar 3, 2003 10:11:38 GMT -5
Post by aj on Mar 3, 2003 10:11:38 GMT -5
Nice image of spring. I can't wait!
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Jasmine
Mar 4, 2003 19:46:29 GMT -5
Post by millilou on Mar 4, 2003 19:46:29 GMT -5
Tanka is one of my favorite forms. This is a really great one. Lovely.
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Jasmine
Mar 5, 2003 22:12:40 GMT -5
Post by engarde on Mar 5, 2003 22:12:40 GMT -5
Thanks! Did you read a double meaning? I've been working on getting double meanings in my verses but I don't think I'm quite there yet  |
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Jasmine
Mar 6, 2003 19:22:25 GMT -5
Post by arynichole on Mar 6, 2003 19:22:25 GMT -5
Really nice. I like this one a lot.  |
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Jasmine
Mar 12, 2003 15:25:39 GMT -5
Post by Matt on Mar 12, 2003 15:25:39 GMT -5
Yes it is real nice. I loved it.
I sorry I posted my thing twice on this board but I messed up and now I dont know how to delet it Im sorry.
Matt
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