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Apr 17, 2003 23:14:11 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on Apr 17, 2003 23:14:11 GMT -5
Push me aside and open the scars Throw me away I don't care. Cut me all over again yes again. Can't feel it because I'm not there. Make you feel better by tearing me down. Burn me and rip off the skin. Sorry you noticed, just leave for a while. Let me recover within. People like you are what hurts me to breathe. People like me on the ground. We put on out faces and hide what's beneath. Remove them when no one's around. And you'll never read this so you'll never know The world as it's seen through these eyes. Not that it matters, like you'd even care. You'll never see through the disguise.
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Apr 18, 2003 15:15:35 GMT -5
Post by ShInE on Apr 18, 2003 15:15:35 GMT -5
GREAT!
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Apr 18, 2003 18:17:22 GMT -5
Post by UnknownPoet on Apr 18, 2003 18:17:22 GMT -5
WOW! Very nice i enjoyed it, very, very true! Chevallier ;D
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TrappedDespair
been around the block
How did it come to this...
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Apr 18, 2003 23:27:05 GMT -5
Post by TrappedDespair on Apr 18, 2003 23:27:05 GMT -5
I read a couple of ur peoms now... they are awesome.. just like mine and that makes it real... straight from the heart is the best weither its free verse or rhyme and u prove that.. awesome job...
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May 7, 2003 0:01:02 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on May 7, 2003 0:01:02 GMT -5
Maybe you meant for the eleventh line to look like that but it doesn't look right. But i love the poem. Maryann22
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gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
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May 7, 2003 4:27:45 GMT -5
Post by gooba on May 7, 2003 4:27:45 GMT -5
hmmmmm your poems are great i love em Gooba
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May 8, 2003 9:27:46 GMT -5
Post by Elisha on May 8, 2003 9:27:46 GMT -5
thank you guys so much for all the replies.
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