soulfullysilent
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If I could know me, I could know the universe
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Post by soulfullysilent on Jul 5, 2004 22:07:49 GMT -5
I'm tired. of crying of hating of losing. how do i break these chains? or melt a heart of ice? and i'm standing here, drowning, in tears. or maybe it's just one. Rolling down your cheek dropping to the floor. where it will dissapear, fade into oblivion. and all i can do is stare, as you turn, leaving me. and you never looked more beautiful. in all your silence, in all your pain. and i'm left to live. how soon i'll forget, never. Please don't forget. how pure and simple my love for you was. it's usless don't hold on i'm broken something stole my laughter the shadows dancing on the wall and i fall to the floor and dissapear fade away into pure unadultered, oblivion with your smile still burning my cheeks and if i could tell you one thing i'd die whispering my love i wonder what it's like to love forever...
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Post by melissa16 on Jul 9, 2004 13:17:41 GMT -5
this is flippen good! it's so sad and so intense and so almost reckless... i love it and it's definately one of the best poems i've read so far on this site.. i hope to read tons more of your work soon!!
i felt so bad for you when i read this, i hope you're all good!
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Post by Danielle6500 on Jul 13, 2004 9:57:39 GMT -5
Wow! So intense it was Great!
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soulfullysilent
newbie
If I could know me, I could know the universe
Posts: 13
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Post by soulfullysilent on Jul 16, 2004 19:51:15 GMT -5
Hey thanks a lot for your comments. I wasn't sure if anyone liked it. but hey cool! thanks!
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