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Post by rsautter on Jun 23, 2004 14:32:43 GMT -5
Sometime soon you will hear my scilent cries Sometime soon wont be soon enough Sometime soon you will see i just wanna die Sometime soon you'll realize Im not so tough How do you know im in pain If you cant see it Too buisy to notice the details Too buisy to notice me Sometime soon you will open your eyes Sometime soon wont be soon enough Sometime soon you will see that my happiness is just a bunch of lies Sometime soon you'll realize Im not so tough The secret to life Is that there is no secret It is all just a trick The trick is to keep breathing Sometime soon you will see that you where to late Sometime soon will regret you weren't soon enough Sometime soon you will see that this is my fate Sometime soon you'll realize Im tougher then you thought I didnt fall for the trick I wasnt too buisy to notice the details
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_leash_
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Post by _leash_ on Jun 23, 2004 17:01:03 GMT -5
so true. you expressed these thoughts well.
there were a few spelling mistakes(ex. buisty) that were a little distracting, but other than that it was very well done.
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