DIZZY

[Elisha]

Around again, the circle.
Around around, the pain.
The love will last forever.
The hurt is all I claim.
Around again, I'm sorry.
Around around, I cry.
Around again, the circle.
Around again I die.
I'm dizzy from this spinning.
The sky is falling down.
Around again forgive me.
Around again, around.

[aj]

Repeating that phrase, "around again" really made the poem. Nice work, Elisha. A good poem is one that touches on common emotions where we can all relate. Thanks for sharing.