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Post by Shakespeare2113 on Apr 30, 2004 8:26:15 GMT -5
Destiny
You were my predetermined destiny For you know one could get the best of me You were my heart and soul With you I never felt this cold
Now that were no longer together You got me feelin like torn leather All used and beatin F*** all the lies and cheatin
I need you to be my one and only All the nights when I’m feelin lonely How bout we take things nice and slowly I need you to caress and hold me
Maybe we made big mistakes How much of this are we gonna take We need to make some decisions Or we’ll be headed for a love collision
Lets just say were friends So when things really come to an end You won’t be so blue And I’ll still be saying I need you!
Lavar Stackhouse
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Post by Jaysie on Apr 30, 2004 10:58:03 GMT -5
Nice write! The rhyme and meter worked very well.
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Post by ugaalltheway on Jun 19, 2004 15:51:03 GMT -5
This is an awesome poem. You have a talent and i look forward to more. And i mean all of this.
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