brokenlover
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"im that teen idol that everyone wants to be, they wouldnt if they really knew me."
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Post by brokenlover on Apr 26, 2004 22:08:38 GMT -5
to a broken hearted boy i am the one you love i am your broken angel sent from above you told me loved with heart speaking true i said i loved you back lying through and through i never meant to hurt you i let it last to long i led you on untruthfully knowing it was wrong try to understand that i do what i feel i had to tell you the truth i knew it wasnt real im sorry for the pain i've caused i do it evertime for when i get exactly what i want thats when i dont want you to be mine so this broken hearted boy send a message along the way make sure they really love you dont just listen to what they say
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XtearsX
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Its funny how a heart is two tear drops upside down...
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Post by XtearsX on Jun 5, 2004 10:32:41 GMT -5
thats a really good poem i like it! ;D i love all forms of good poetry and i dont lie about poetry
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Post by Jaysie on Jun 7, 2004 11:06:08 GMT -5
it can be a really hard thing to deal with when you hurt someone you care about. thanks for sharing, hun!
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Post by melissa16 on Jun 7, 2004 13:22:05 GMT -5
wow... haven't we all been there? this is a great description!!
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Post by roxygirl14 on Jul 20, 2004 20:40:56 GMT -5
i really like it i can really relate to it keep up the good work ok
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soulfullysilent
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If I could know me, I could know the universe
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Post by soulfullysilent on Jul 21, 2004 19:20:17 GMT -5
god girl, I know exactly what you mean. i mean if that isn't the story of my love life i don't know what is. it was really good! go you! ;D
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Post by Danielle6500 on Jul 21, 2004 20:17:01 GMT -5
Wow i know i can painfully relate to this one! Awesome write I love these lines:
Really great job!
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