brokenlover
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"im that teen idol that everyone wants to be, they wouldnt if they really knew me."
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Post by brokenlover on Apr 25, 2004 22:49:14 GMT -5
lets die together you and i pinky linked pinky energy free crisp self-mutilation our shared passion elegant scars those are our fasions lets die together our torture we hide glide of the blade blood will obide rusty old lover knows me inside and out realeasing all anguish letting it out lets die together you and I they'll find us together, together we'll die
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brokenlover
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"im that teen idol that everyone wants to be, they wouldnt if they really knew me."
Posts: 24
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Post by brokenlover on Apr 25, 2004 23:04:31 GMT -5
i understand completely
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brokenlover
newbie
"im that teen idol that everyone wants to be, they wouldnt if they really knew me."
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Post by brokenlover on Apr 26, 2004 21:43:57 GMT -5
someone reply i want to know what people think!
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Post by aj on Apr 29, 2004 1:19:52 GMT -5
Suicide is a serious thing. Not a subject to be dismissed. I know these feelings are common and real. And, I also know no one really wants to die. They just want the pain to die.
Seeing the difference can be your salvation.
That being said, I liked the approach. I like how it's seems to be a secret conversation between two people in the same boat. It's like a peek inside a hidden world. Nice work.
And chin up, lovely.
Love, AJ
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