Shine

[hypergrl513]

The silence
Is my only shelter
From this reckless world
And from its people
Always moaning
About trivial things
Take time to breathe
For it may be your last

I want to dance
In the moonlight
While small droplets
Of water dance
Upon my bare shoulders
In the mid-summer’s
Breezy night

I want the stars
To shine
Like they used to
Or maybe now
I just don’t notice
Them as bright

[aj]

hypergrl513 said:

Take time to breathe
For it may be your last...
Or maybe now
I just don’t notice
Them as bright

I love these lines, hypergirl.
-AJ

[hypergrl513]

Thanks

[Jaysie]

I really enjoyed the last stanza. Nice work!

[ugaalltheway]

I liked the entire poem but the last part was the best.

[melissa16]

It shows me such a beautiful picture! I read somewhere that the best poems are those you can picture(whoever said that-I agree with you!!)
This poem is gorgeous!! i love the first three lines the most, great write!! ;D