Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on Apr 7, 2004 12:50:49 GMT -5
Blood running free No more to see All the tears are seas Burning, dead trees Thoughts are acting out Annialation is wrought out No more to realize Futile escape tries Memories become live To escape we strive No more of a dream An immobile stream Or a passing of life No more of a life Not a single glance As a rythmic dance No more say a ryhme Or keep a tempered time Nothing left to say A memorial day And I cast a shadowed glance No more of a disturnbing trance And as the wind blows Away hope goes
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Post by aj on Apr 29, 2004 1:29:48 GMT -5
I liked the rhythm, Reality. It's almost like lyrics to a song!
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
Posts: 118
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Post by Reality Bytes on Apr 29, 2004 16:14:21 GMT -5
gracias
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Post by ugaalltheway on Jun 19, 2004 17:28:36 GMT -5
Real good poem. It has awesome rythym. Keep up the good work.
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