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Post by ~Erosion of the physco mind~ on Mar 12, 2004 17:01:32 GMT -5
Crawling on the floor, Not knowing where to go, I beat myself to a bloody pulp, Nothing left in my heart, Not for anyone, Not even me. I just want to be left alone, Because obviously no one can see, All the darkness i'm building up in me. They say they all know me, That i can't do any good. I jusyt want to die, Let them all be, I'm not doing them any good, Because all they say i think aboutm Is "me, me, me!" I try not to listen, I try not to care, But everything they say to me, It's peirceing my ears. It hurts so much, Just to try to hold back tears. NO boday's listening, No body's here, I'm to negitive, So now they just don't even care!
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on Mar 12, 2004 17:03:31 GMT -5
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Post by ~Erosion of the physco mind~ on Mar 12, 2004 17:09:21 GMT -5
you know....i'm not sure of how i should take that.....knowing you it's sarcasim, but for once it might not be!! haha...wait....ya...no....ya ok...i'm done!
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tk4ever
still rather new
I'm the ruler of the underworld, yet a slave to modern society.
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Post by tk4ever on Mar 12, 2004 17:37:35 GMT -5
wow....that was so deep...... 8-)it kind of scared me.....youre really gifted!plz check out my poems
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Post by toomanyhearts4luv on Mar 13, 2004 23:47:32 GMT -5
you know.. it all makes sense. read "Different Side To Every Story" and then you will know I can relate
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Post by ~Erosion of the physco mind~ on Mar 16, 2004 16:25:16 GMT -5
THANX!!! i thought no one would like it!! ^_^ i was wrong! lol
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XtearsX
newbie
Its funny how a heart is two tear drops upside down...
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Post by XtearsX on Jun 7, 2004 13:38:27 GMT -5
I love the poem.......ur so gifted! i cant write as good as that! Some people think my writing is good........but yea w/e anyway i absolutely loved the poem it rox!
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Post by ~Erosion of the physco mind~ on Jun 8, 2004 10:50:57 GMT -5
thanx!!! ^_^ i still think all my poems can be better, but i try!
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