Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on Mar 4, 2004 17:38:50 GMT -5
I stand in sorrow as I meditate on the morrow Alas, Alas, it has come to pass the destruction of my soul, alas.
Drown out the song I've committed no wrong Beat out the sin You cannot win
Roll the green carpet up Pour the rain out of my cup For here is the fall Changer of all
Summer is no longer here Now is the saddest time of year Dabble thy brush fall Over the summers wall
Cool the wind Cool the wind Chill the grasses When each breath passes
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tk4ever
still rather new
I'm the ruler of the underworld, yet a slave to modern society.
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Post by tk4ever on Mar 8, 2004 19:03:38 GMT -5
:Dyou are a great writer!!! I personally loved this poem! Theres just one line that I didn't like (i know your not intrested but I shall still tell you) Its the cool the grasses......its just odd.....please rate me stuff
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
Posts: 118
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Post by Reality Bytes on Mar 10, 2004 19:43:56 GMT -5
Means Frost is coming
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