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Post by romanticone1983 on Oct 8, 2003 10:38:57 GMT -5
Ghetto Gorgeous: she's ghetto gorgeous; the crème de la crème of the crazy/sexy/cool persuasion; she's a poor man's 50 dollar bill/second chance. cinderella’s got nothing on my friend of many colors. she never asks where is the love 'cause she knows it doesn't matter. love is where the heart settles down. she's the type that'd slow dance in a crowded bar ; some rock 'n roll tune playin' just to show that the perfect moment doesn't require candles and a slow song. if she'd let me, i'd slow dance with her in stormy conditions weather outside where it's risky just to show i understand. if only she'd let me.
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kawazu13
been around the block
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Post by kawazu13 on Oct 8, 2003 18:32:28 GMT -5
you cant interpret this however you want to but i think its cute!
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Post by romanticone1983 on Oct 8, 2003 18:49:59 GMT -5
lol Thanks
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Post by unburntflame on Oct 8, 2003 19:03:37 GMT -5
"ghetto gorgeous"....perfect title for one ripper of a poem! thanks for sharing Pat!
luv flame
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Post by 'the'*devil* on Oct 8, 2003 19:05:24 GMT -5
Wow pat! this is such a fantastic write!!! I loved it:D
luv dev
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Post by romanticone1983 on Oct 8, 2003 19:12:42 GMT -5
Thanks U2 ;D
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lilphotogal
still rather new
...and each seperate dying ember wroght it's ghost upon the floor
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Post by lilphotogal on Oct 8, 2003 20:51:53 GMT -5
Love your poem, really great!
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Post by unburntflame on Oct 9, 2003 5:08:46 GMT -5
I understand it better second/third/fourth time around. I'll let ya! but u gotta come here! Lol! hehehe luv flame
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Post by romanticone1983 on Oct 9, 2003 20:58:55 GMT -5
lol Oh, okay. If you insist lol
Love, Pat
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Post by mazdachic1046 on Oct 18, 2003 0:03:53 GMT -5
whats not to understand? great poem.
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Post by romanticone1983 on Oct 18, 2003 0:09:51 GMT -5
thanks ;D sincerely, pat
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Post by 'the'*devil* on Oct 20, 2003 5:28:16 GMT -5
ive just read this again, and each time i read it im lovin it more n more *cookies* pat
luv me
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Post by unburntflame on Nov 5, 2003 0:36:56 GMT -5
yeah.....uh huh.....right on.....yeah......go gurlfrend..... soz pat.....i feel crazeee and i agree with dev! for both of yas! lol luv ur frend flame
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Post by romanticone1983 on Nov 8, 2003 4:44:43 GMT -5
lol Thanks you 2 ;D Love, Pat
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