New Word Challenge

[aj]

Time to take out the thesaurus, folks. Rewrite this piece using different words. You may make it longer, shorter or change the arrangement as long as the message is the same. Good luck!

Dark ash, the evening sky and up sails my mind!
O, up fly my worries; away, away from me.
Lift off this skin these heavy times
and make me as light as the air!

[melissa16]

Black remains, the night-time heavens, and to them travel my thoughts
Ah, gone are my problems; gliding, gliding to escape from me
Pick away the burdened period of my life
And make me to float on the breeze!

lol, sorry, but i just had to have a go!

[aj]

Very nice. I like it.

-AJ