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Post by Sarah on Apr 8, 2003 13:44:05 GMT -5
Living in this world of sadness,
All around there is so much madness,
Now my heart has been torn,
Ever since the day I was born,
Trying to live up to my expectations,
Hardly worrying about my comformation,
Today mt mind starts to ache,
But now I will get my well derserved break,
A day like music to my ears,
A day without any fears.
Sarah
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Post by Elisha on Apr 8, 2003 17:23:50 GMT -5
I really like your poem, it's the best! I think there's too much madness in the world too.
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Post by Maryann22 on Apr 8, 2003 19:32:38 GMT -5
I really liked this poem keep up the great work. Maryann22
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Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 20:43:32 GMT -5
sarah. i like your poem. i think it was very well written it's very sad though. i wanna give ya a hug!!!!  |
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Post by Sour89 on Apr 11, 2003 15:42:58 GMT -5
Sarah
I loved the poem! It was really great! It was very sad and powerful. You really know how to get your point acrossed.
PEACE, Sarah
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