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Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:49:42 GMT -5
True scars and darkness in me moving on to face the things I have once seen I feel like I am going to explode like a popped vein I have so much anger, I have so much pain I have been awake for days I am not stuiped nor dumb I know I am waiting for an answer that won't come It is time to stop the fight It is time to see the light The world is new and a change is long pass due I'll stand with pride I shall not hide I'll do my best to pass this challenging test It's time to make amends I'ts time for this life to end and a new one to begin
(copyright of Amanda McGehee)
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Post by Maryann22 on Apr 8, 2003 11:05:31 GMT -5
I like your poems. Seems you write on the dark side. Keep up the great work. Maryann22
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Post by Elisha on Apr 8, 2003 17:31:58 GMT -5
it is dark but it's good. I like dark poems though, they usually end up meaning more than the ones about rainbows and flowers and butterflies do. Sometimes you have to be dark to be great.
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Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:07:50 GMT -5
beautiful once again. i like dark poems. they're so much easier to relate to.
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