Illusion

[caged]

The engine purs
like a baby kitten
the blades whip by
like a dragon flys wings
the controls feel smooth in my hands
like a nice fitting glove
the plane takes off
it flys
it turns
it dive
it tumbles
it crashes
the battries to my remote control are dead

[Maryann22]

Caged, I liked this poem. keep up the great work. Maryann22

[aj]

I liked the line, "the engine purrs like a baby kitten".

[rissed]

you told me about this poem, caged.
you never actually said that it was good!!!!!!!

[caged]

thanks rissed I try

[Krystle]

Hay Caged i thought your poem was great. Expecialy how it turned out to be a remote controlled plane.