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Post by aj on Jun 30, 2004 16:20:02 GMT -5
Describe any of the following items as if you're explaining them to someone who has never seen or heard of them in any form you like, and without using the items' names. (That ought to keep you busy. Heh-heh.)
love
music
prayer
anger
fear
dance
Please add your haiku to this thread as a reply. It is neater and more organized that way. Thanks!
**I changed it a bit, so more people will give it a try.
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Post by aj on Jul 14, 2004 22:29:41 GMT -5
Ok. I'll start it then.  Prayer A wish, a promise, to the great unseen. A reaching outward with inner dreams. A whispered word to a divine ear. A bargain with begging or a calling near. *umm...I'm working on it.  |
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Post by Jaysie on Jul 15, 2004 9:29:07 GMT -5
ok, i get it now! i'll get to work. nice work, btw! |
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Post by aj on Jul 21, 2004 19:32:15 GMT -5
Cool! Looking forward to it. It doesn't have to rhyme btw. It just happened that way. AJ |
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Post by Danielle6500 on Jul 21, 2004 20:31:13 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]LOVE[/glow] You took your heart out straight out of your chest and threw it real high and held your breath And then it got stuck somewhere in the clouds and no matter what you did it just wouldn't come down You'd feel kind of scared Anxious of what would happen next Happy for the here and now withough knowing what to expect [glow=red,2,300]LOVE[/glow] This was quite a difficult challenge for me, great idea AJ! |
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Post by aj on Jul 22, 2004 19:31:11 GMT -5
Great one. Glad you liked it. Try the others. -AJ |
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Post by Danielle6500 on Jul 23, 2004 1:04:03 GMT -5
Well, if you insist LoL I've had so much trouble writing lately these challenges are really helping FEAR I'm breathing so hard and think of nothing else there's goosebumps on my arm i want to scream for help The breathing becomes harder I'm frozen standing still I want to run but I just stand just stand, against my will My body starts to shake in such a violent way and suddenly I know the end is happening today. |
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Post by aj on Jul 24, 2004 11:12:58 GMT -5
Good. And I'm glad these are helping you. Keep it up! -AJ |
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Post by melissa16 on Aug 29, 2004 5:56:48 GMT -5
DANCE I beg you, don't care, don't hear what they say
Surrender to the music springing from your core You're everywhere Close your eyes, lift your arms up high
You're as free as an eagle, you can fly, you can fly... |
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Post by aj on Aug 29, 2004 23:56:17 GMT -5
Lovely, Melissa. Nice work.
-AJ
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Post by melissa16 on Sept 4, 2004 2:49:40 GMT -5
thanks AJ!! ;D
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Post by aj on Sept 19, 2004 13:52:53 GMT -5
Anger
It is a fire,
a heat on my brain
that consumes my reason
and makes molten my restraint.
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Reality Bytes
been around the block
I spend too much time on my computer...
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Post by Reality Bytes on Dec 5, 2005 15:51:50 GMT -5
Music
The tremble starts in the ears, growing in intesity,
It reaches your hands, which feel the beat,
Making the melody all the more intense.
The highs and lows, negatives and positives.
The empassioned lyrics pouring like waterfalls,
The lightness of falsetto,
The terrible beauty of bass.
The pattern falls back in place.
Which then breaks, causing goosebumps,
Creeping down your back,
Around your arms,
Tingling in your feet,
Then resolution.
The darkness of minor replaced by the light of major,
Or the other way around.
The basic note in bass plays, strong and fading.
The harmonies reverborate and fade.
Then it stops, all is still.
But you still hear it,
As it echoes in your mind,
Staying for a long while.
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Post by korngurl1984 on Feb 17, 2007 22:29:21 GMT -5
Dance
The movement of your feet,
The feel of defeat,
Challenge your soul,
To sway as one whole,
Listen to the sound,
It's all around,
Just move your hips,
Not your lips,
lol I dont know about this one it's harder then I thought
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theendlessdream
brand, spanking new
Love me for who I am, but hate yourself for what you lost.
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Post by theendlessdream on Aug 27, 2010 19:46:35 GMT -5
DANCE
A message of unspoken words,
flowing through the human vessel.
The physical form of emotion,
moving just as gracefully as the ocean.
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