caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
Posts: 90
|
Post by caged on Apr 6, 2003 20:23:56 GMT -5
It turns and tumbles,
It spins and spirals,
over and over it goes
unsure, lost, consumed
pulled and pushed,
thus is the existance
of a plastic bag,
caught in the wind
this is a first for me please give me your thoughts
|
|
|
|
Post by aj on Apr 6, 2003 20:35:46 GMT -5
I liked it. You took me along and a bag was the last thing on my mind.  |
|
|
|
Post by Maryann22 on Apr 6, 2003 21:00:59 GMT -5
very nice I wouldn't have guessed that you were talking about a bag. keep posting and I will keep reading. Maryann22
|
|
|
|
Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:22:53 GMT -5
I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. It is a good poem and I would have never have guess a bag, which makes it more interesting to read your work.
|
|
|
|
Post by millilou on Apr 8, 2003 13:41:25 GMT -5
good twist on an everyday occurance. Great job!!!
|
|
gooba
been around the block
From your loving neighbourhood gooba!!!!
Posts: 102
|
Post by gooba on Apr 8, 2003 20:12:01 GMT -5
thats good enough for me not that i read it but hey
|
|
caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
Posts: 90
|
Post by caged on Apr 8, 2003 20:43:59 GMT -5
Yet again I am not suprised to be responding to a stupid post written by gooba (if you are unsure to what I am talking about then look at "What is life" and you will see what I am talking about. Yet again I ask that no attetion be paid to the response from gooba as they are morronic and have no actual imput or useful comments, if you are wondering I know Gooba personally, we go to the same school and I have told him not to be stupid. If you support my point of view please respond
|
|
|
|
Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:04:07 GMT -5
i support. i still luv ya ;D
|
|
