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Apr 6, 2003 20:11:18 GMT -5
Post by Alone on Apr 6, 2003 20:11:18 GMT -5
I try to wave my arms, but I can't move I try to scream, but I can't speak I try to cry, but I have no tears so I sit, I sit and I wait I wait to move, I wait to scream, I wait to cry, but most of all, I wait to die
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upset
Apr 6, 2003 20:59:20 GMT -5
Post by Maryann22 on Apr 6, 2003 20:59:20 GMT -5
nice poem keep up the great work. Maryann22
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upset
Apr 8, 2003 0:25:36 GMT -5
Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:25:36 GMT -5
I really like this poem, you show a lot of emotion. I would like to hear more of your work.
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upset
Apr 8, 2003 14:01:27 GMT -5
Post by Sarah on Apr 8, 2003 14:01:27 GMT -5
I agree with Poetgrl57,you show alot of emotion in your writing.I liked your poem alot.
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upset
Apr 8, 2003 21:24:01 GMT -5
Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:24:01 GMT -5
i like your poem. i hope it's not even partially true though!
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