Amanda
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Post by Amanda on Apr 5, 2003 1:58:29 GMT -5
It's so strange him being so quiet He used to be the kind to start a big riot He's making a change for the worst Drinking and drugs-what a curse. Not just a little dude, it's a lot he's all pale and his teeth are begining to rot All he can think of is paranoia-what if he gets caught He's way of life is going to get him-just watch He's running out of money now-no bank account About 20 minutes he'll come down-with now way out He starts to sweat- shake and shout He tears apart the furniture-whatever's in sight He knows that he's in for a hell of a night Doing what he can-just to get a buzz He doesn't know what he's doing-whatever he does Picks up the phone to call a friend To ask if he can borrow or lend He gets some of the good stuff-but he doesn't know He's about to overdose and die really slow He pours out white powder-he's ready to go He makes ten lines and takes it all through his nose Falling to the floor- he thinks it's the best But he can't ignore the pain in his chest
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Post by Maryann22 on Apr 5, 2003 5:40:04 GMT -5
very heartfelt poem. Keep up the great work. Maryann22
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Post by Sarah on Apr 5, 2003 7:22:15 GMT -5
I agree with Maryann22, very heartfelt. Nice job, thanks for sharing. Sarah
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Post by poetgrl57 on Apr 8, 2003 0:38:24 GMT -5
I was a very heartfelt poem and I use to know a few people like that. You did a great job. It was a very very good poem.
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Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:39:35 GMT -5
that's very graphic and very real. awakening. well done.
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Post by heatherzafeather on May 1, 2003 20:58:15 GMT -5
good poem
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sanket
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Post by sanket on May 4, 2003 5:01:24 GMT -5
well done
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