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Post by Sarah on Apr 4, 2003 7:12:39 GMT -5
The road curves, As the grass bends, A weary stranger rests his feet, On a large gray boulder, Along a wide pathway, Decorated with fruits of all sorts, Blowing in the wind, Are the leaves from the nearby orchards. The stranger thinks he has found complete happiness, When all of a sudden the sky grows red, And the birds melodic chirp slowly fades away, The world becomes dark as the sun goes down, And night has come and day is gone forever.
Sarah
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Post by Maryann22 on Apr 4, 2003 14:16:21 GMT -5
Even thought I really enjoy rhyming poems, however this one is very nice. Maryann22
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Post by fairawen on Apr 4, 2003 23:31:38 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this poem! Your words, of course, played a story that, in all truth, told all. I hope to soon see more of your poetry! ~~Fairawen~~
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Post by Elisha on Apr 5, 2003 12:05:06 GMT -5
I really like this poem! It makes me feel lost and want to be really quiet for some reason. you should write more!
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Post by mcb4444 on Apr 8, 2003 15:28:22 GMT -5
Very moving, I like it a lot.
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Post by rissed on Apr 8, 2003 21:13:26 GMT -5
thumbs up from me! methinks that everyone here is a wicked poet!
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