lost
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Post by lost on Oct 4, 2012 19:45:58 GMT -5
I am walking in a long dimly lit tunnel that twists and turns making me dizzy. As I think I have found the end i see it spit into several tunnels each with its own story and ending. My heart now hurts I feel i have no control over whats happening around me the ground shakes and rumbles beneath my feet. I collapse to my knees praying God or anyone will show me the right way as the tunnel quickly grows dimmer and dimmer. I strain my eyes against the darkness looking for the sign my heart so desperately seeks. A definitive answer but alas i see nothing. So I now wander this darkness feeling lost and empty still searching for "my path" .
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TKei
been around the block
"Some wrongs we must hide, lest we expose our honour." Vauvenargues
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Post by TKei on Oct 6, 2012 0:49:43 GMT -5
I like the way it's written, and there seems to be a few possible meanings to this, though I'm not sure which one your getting at. Reminds me a bit of when I wrote Divided and The Labyrinth. A very confused frame of mind.
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