ziggyx
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Post by ziggyx on Sept 6, 2012 11:37:53 GMT -5
What the future Holds
Bleak, Bright Forgettable, Memorable Hate, Love
In this moment in time I hurt like hell I keep my hands busy to stop your spell What the future holds who can tell?
I feel myself getting mad I tried so hard; now to think that you are glad It seems your heart has been covered in steel clad What the future holds; I want to tell
I gave you all that I had held Now I feel, by you, that I am repelled Not sure now how to feel; with my heart being so dispelled What you want from the Future I wish you could tell
In the past, you and I, we had a blast With all the memories we built to last Now we take steps apart with that I’m scared to restart What the future holds, people say, the past can tell
What once was is now dimming What once was I’m afraid will become crippling What once was I cannot dwell Because what the future holds I cannot tell
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TKei
been around the block
"Some wrongs we must hide, lest we expose our honour." Vauvenargues
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Post by TKei on Sept 7, 2012 14:29:36 GMT -5
I personally think that you should leave reviews and opinions to just comments, not taking polls. Just my opinion. All in all, decent poem.
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