eternal sleep

[deadtotheworld]

Just give me my eternal f****** sleep,
cant you see id do it myself but im too f****** weak!
Oh merciful god please set me free,
take me away from these monsters I cant bare to see.
Im giving up, im giving in. That’s what I get for a life of sin.
Someone help me now, I can no longer weap,
Please give me my eternal f****** sleep.


- I know i'm not any good but this is just some stuff that came into my head. Judge awayyy

[TKei]

There is no need to think of yourself or your poetry in such a poor way. Poetry is a form of art, which is judged by opinion, not necessarily by critical means. Often times, good poems are just words that "come to people." Meaningless words can be given a meaning to the right eyes and ears.