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Post by DaringDo on May 1, 2012 0:27:00 GMT -5
Oh Blank Paper so white and black, but mostly white, absent of words. My eyes fixated on the screen. I cannot deal with you right now.
Oh Blank Paper, please write yourself Thin black lines, please fill this white void Ten pages, please don't wait for me I dream of the hour I'm done.
Oh Full Paper, I love you so The nice fulfilling characters place yourselves on the burning screen. Oh Blank Paper, I wish you were.
spent the last 20 minutes writing that instead of my paper... :3
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TKei
been around the block
"Some wrongs we must hide, lest we expose our honour." Vauvenargues
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Post by TKei on May 1, 2012 22:43:44 GMT -5
I'll be honest... I don't quite like it. Nothing personal, it's just so simple, and almost meaningless in my eyes. Sorry. (I'm an honest man)
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Post by DaringDo on May 1, 2012 23:50:16 GMT -5
i appreciate honesty! yea, its not supposed to have a ton of metaphors or anything like that... i just wanted to write something simple--no strings attached.. haha
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