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Post by Elisha on Apr 3, 2003 17:05:48 GMT -5
Who says I have to like myself? Who says I have to smile? Who says I have to play along, With clones in single file? Who says I have to keep it up? These pointless, mindless freaks? Who says we must behave ourselves? Who wrote the words we speak? Who says we all came from the sky? Who says we have to pay? Pay for all these made up crimes. Pay for one more day. Who wrote the rules we live by? Who tells us what we need? Who says we all must fall in line? Who says we can't smoke weed? Who's the one who made the signs That tell us where to go? Who decided life for me? Who says they even know?
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Post by Maryann22 on Apr 3, 2003 18:30:48 GMT -5
I think this poem is great keep up the good work and keep posting. Maryann22
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SwEeTdReAmS
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Post by SwEeTdReAmS on Apr 4, 2003 23:19:10 GMT -5
wow i really love this poem! it is soo good! keep up the wonderful work! you are VERY talented!
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Post by HELENLYNNROBINSON on Apr 5, 2003 6:29:44 GMT -5
hey that was a gret poem it gave me goose bumps and not a lot does that! good poems keep writting
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Post by herpoetry on Apr 6, 2003 14:36:17 GMT -5
i really liked the poem you wrote i think that u r a good poet!!! i am new to this and i have a poem on here but i can't find it! it is called That Day. it is a poem about Sept. 11, 2001! Well bye! Stay cool !
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Post by unburntflame on May 29, 2003 2:05:44 GMT -5
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Post by Elisha on May 29, 2003 12:40:47 GMT -5
Hey thanks everybody! You guys rock. Luv ya, Elisha
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Post by kawazu13 on May 29, 2003 20:55:54 GMT -5
wow... good... this is one of the first times in my life wen im lost 4 words!
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