My first post

[hiddentears]

I've never shared a poem before, so here goes:

It's so hard to see her
She honestly looks dead
Crying her self to sleep
Suicidal thoughts in her head
I wish that I could leave her
Is that really such a crime?
But I'm stuck with this girl
Until the end of time
Her bodies only flesh and bones
I wish that she would eat
Horrifically thin and boney
From her head down to her feet
She will always smile at you
She really wants to frown
It hurts me so to look at her
So I put the mirror down.

[aj]

Welcome!


Thank you for sharing your work with us. I hope you come back and post some more.

[freedomislogic]

Know how this feels: you don;t ever want to abandon her. Nice poem!

[nashwriter]

Nice one