Secrets

[guyfrommars765]

Why have a secret?
Secrets are snakes in the grass.
They are destructive.
They can tear life to shreads.
They make the truth more painful.
They ruin you.
They make life miserable.
They result in pain and aguish.
They are never ending terror.
I beg you, don't keep these secrets, for they will be your undoing.
Life is happy and painfull.
But secrets supercharge the pain.
Good thing I have no secrets.

Any comments?

[Devi145]

heys I have a comment more or less about you than your poem....


I missed you bunches!


Your poem is somewhat true, some times you do need to keep secrets, to protect yourself from getting hurt, even sometimes if you love the person a lot. But i do agree, keeping secrets is painful. I liked your poem, good job Robert.



Liz

[guyfrommars765]

Thanx Liz
-Robert