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Post by Devi145 on Jun 11, 2003 22:05:06 GMT -5
I draw only the eye's of humans, only the eye's of a creature so delicate but resentful
The left eye representing dreams of the brilliant mind, the artist's state...
Power and envy consumes the right eye that willingly subdues to create.
Drawing line's that portray a string of life around the iris of the eye,
Simply devine curves and beautiful colors that defy.
My drawings aren't masterpieces, but pure stories told...
Every difference, show's a new life started, a new beginning.
I draw the eye's of passion, the eye's of hate...
The darkened and furious, the soft gentle eye's that behold,
Await.
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Post by LittleLostGirl on Jun 12, 2003 1:41:17 GMT -5
Hey Devi! I really enjoyed reading this poem, it was good! *thumbs up*
Love Always,
*Lil Bug-a-Boo*
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Post by Devi145 on Jun 12, 2003 14:14:11 GMT -5
Tankies! I appreciate any comments on my poetry, I've been drawn toward writing of more personal surroundings lately, this thought actually came about in summer school, hehe...paying attention to class? of course i am... ;D
Liz a.k.a Dev
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