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Post by romanticone1983 on Jun 2, 2003 23:08:40 GMT -5
angel
you are what i
dream of as the night reigns
i adore the smile you carry
dream girl
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Post by Jaysie on Jun 8, 2003 19:12:47 GMT -5
Perfection, Pat! Absolute perfection!!!
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Post by romanticone1983 on Jun 8, 2003 19:32:00 GMT -5
thanks.
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Post by Restless on Jun 12, 2003 23:03:41 GMT -5
beautiful write pat!!!!
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Post by romanticone1983 on Jun 14, 2003 13:30:52 GMT -5
thanks. i enjoyed the challenge of making words fit together well enough to be beautiful in so few lines.
sincerely,
pat
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Post by Alexia on Jun 17, 2003 19:47:12 GMT -5
Great work Pat!!!! Loved it!
Alexia
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Post by Restless on Jul 8, 2003 22:26:18 GMT -5
I love "i adore the smile you carry" so nicely said Pat!!!
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Post by romantic1since83 on Jul 8, 2003 23:02:42 GMT -5
Thanks ;D I'm glad that you guys think so highly of it  Sometimes poems just sorta come to me and I just go with the flow. Thank you all  Sincerely, Pat |
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Post by Char on Jan 27, 2004 15:12:47 GMT -5
You live up to your name... Beautifully said! Charlene ;D
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Post by aj on May 16, 2004 3:16:50 GMT -5
Very nice. I really liked it.
-AJ
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Sometimes poems just sorta come to me and I just go with the flow. Thank you all 
