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May 30, 2003 16:16:00 GMT -5
Post by millilou on May 30, 2003 16:16:00 GMT -5
I feel the pain...and the hope. Beautiful, AJ!
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Sorrow
May 31, 2003 1:57:53 GMT -5
Post by Jaysie on May 31, 2003 1:57:53 GMT -5
Phenomenal, AJ!! Out-and-out beautiful!
Jaysie
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Sorrow
May 31, 2003 20:17:57 GMT -5
Post by Jaysie on May 31, 2003 20:17:57 GMT -5
Thank you AJ! It is hard to read many of these poems without becoming inspired! Again, nice work, as always!
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Sorrow
Jun 4, 2003 20:45:42 GMT -5
Post by Restless on Jun 4, 2003 20:45:42 GMT -5
Very nice AJ.........I like the twist at the end!!! Nice work!
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paxia
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Jun 7, 2003 15:30:58 GMT -5
Post by paxia on Jun 7, 2003 15:30:58 GMT -5
I agree. I wasn't expecting that sudden change at the end...in an odd sort of way, it's kind of uplifting...LOOOVE it.
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