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Post by millilou on Mar 8, 2003 23:12:59 GMT -5
Morning
the sun rises
another day begins
just like the ones that went before
Sunset
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Post by Maryann22 on Mar 8, 2003 23:40:32 GMT -5
i really like this
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Post by engarde on Mar 9, 2003 6:48:38 GMT -5
Well said! It comes across as a circle, ending where it began...
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Post by millilou on Mar 9, 2003 20:18:41 GMT -5
Thanks, I was trying to capture the endless cycle of time.
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Post by arynichole on Mar 11, 2003 19:32:40 GMT -5
"endless cycle of time"...now that's a poem in itself~
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Post by millilou on Mar 20, 2003 19:26:12 GMT -5
Thanks...maybe I'll write it someday...or maybe you will. It's funny how almost anything we poets say can be made into a poem, at least in our own hearts...glad we're of like minds. Thanks again  |
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Post by mcb4444 on Apr 24, 2003 17:30:00 GMT -5
A feeling of completion and yet sadness, too. The sameness of everyday and yet with sunset the hope of tomorrow. Really like this one.
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Post by Yellie on Apr 25, 2003 17:25:24 GMT -5
Lifes circles taken out of our individual minded perspective seems eternal, only we move in birth and decay and see it all that way.....
Ur poem inspired me to wonder about life to life itself...thanks!
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Post by Jaysie on May 1, 2003 17:22:50 GMT -5
What a gem!!
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