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Feb 21, 2003 16:19:16 GMT -5
Post by Yellie on Feb 21, 2003 16:19:16 GMT -5
Deep, deep snow.
Make me flow,
High and
Low,
Heroin Romeo
Make me smile,
Make me cry,
Fly.
Needle eye,
Romeo
I got to let you go
Watching footprints,
In the deep, deep snow.
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ResQ381
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Feb 23, 2003 17:46:13 GMT -5
Post by ResQ381 on Feb 23, 2003 17:46:13 GMT -5
that is soooooo good
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Feb 25, 2003 10:28:02 GMT -5
Post by aj on Feb 25, 2003 10:28:02 GMT -5
Nice job, Yellie!
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Feb 28, 2003 13:43:50 GMT -5
Post by Yellie on Feb 28, 2003 13:43:50 GMT -5
Thank you very much  By the way I am not sure that the form is correct to be a Cinquain poem...what is the standard from for that kind of poem? |
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Feb 28, 2003 16:38:43 GMT -5
Post by aj on Feb 28, 2003 16:38:43 GMT -5
Cinquains are five lines. The first line is 2 syllables, the second is 4, the third is 6, the fourth is 8, and the last is 2. But who really cares, Yellie? That was good!
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