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Post by melissa16 on May 11, 2004 14:40:53 GMT -5
Lazy moonlight glides
Gently touching sunburnt flowers
Soothing them to sleep
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Post by aj on May 11, 2004 17:00:47 GMT -5
oooh. Lovely imagery.
Nice work, Melissa.
-AJ
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Post by Jaysie on May 13, 2004 9:42:23 GMT -5
/nods
in complete agreement with AJ
very lovely!!
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Post by melissa16 on May 14, 2004 12:32:47 GMT -5
thank you for all the kind words! they really mean lots to me!
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_leash_
not so new anymore
shattered ocean
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Post by _leash_ on Jun 22, 2004 12:37:10 GMT -5
beautiful work.. this is definately my favourite haiku here. exceptional writing, melissa. i enjoyed this piece much.. thank you for sharing it with us.  |
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Post by melissa16 on Jun 22, 2004 13:25:54 GMT -5
thank you very much for your opinion!!  welcome to this site and i hope you have a great time posting! Lissa |
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_leash_
not so new anymore
shattered ocean
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Post by _leash_ on Jun 23, 2004 14:04:55 GMT -5
thank you for the warm welcome lissa it looks like im going to enjoy myself very much here. such a great atmosphere! |
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