endless (my first try-need ur opinions)

melissa16 mod team When I have a terrible need of - shall I say the word - religion. Then I go out and paint the stars Posts: 443	endless (my first try-need ur opinions) May 9, 2004 11:45:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by melissa16 on May 9, 2004 11:45:46 GMT -5 come fly me away this tormented endlessness like the sunless sea
	Last Edit: May 9, 2004 11:50:11 GMT -5 by melissa16 MeLiSsA "Sometimes it seems like all I hope for just gets thrown down on the floor and then it seems like you don't love me anymore sometimes I wish that I could run away sometimes I wish I just had something to say" -Blink 182

aj Guest	endless (my first try-need ur opinions) May 10, 2004 16:58:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by aj on May 10, 2004 16:58:44 GMT -5 Nice imagery. Good one. -AJ

_leash_ not so new anymore shattered ocean Posts: 78	endless (my first try-need ur opinions) Jun 22, 2004 1:26:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by _leash_ on Jun 22, 2004 1:26:51 GMT -5 AJ said: Nice imagery. Good one. -AJ agreed. i especially liked the final line, "like the sunless sea." beautiful work, melissa.. i hope to read more over the next few days.
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