deepsky
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Seeing the blue light, Spirit breath victorious, Rokkaku haiku
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Post by deepsky on Mar 28, 2004 12:02:26 GMT -5
Bright steel factory
Inhales, exhales smoke and thrum,
Dark birds ride the plumes
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Post by aj on Mar 28, 2004 19:11:25 GMT -5
Nice imagery.
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deepsky
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Seeing the blue light, Spirit breath victorious, Rokkaku haiku
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Post by deepsky on Mar 30, 2004 18:08:07 GMT -5
I guess I just hear so much about 'man vs nature', and yet nature can 'exploit' us too. Darkness and light can be turned around, in small ways, in certain places. The pigeons seemed to capture that.
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Post by aj on Mar 31, 2004 12:40:11 GMT -5
The seagulls around here do a fine job of it. And they shriek from the sky as they circle.
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