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Post by Sultriness on Nov 7, 2003 15:10:37 GMT -5
Iniquity reigns;
Shadowed in obscurity,
Darkness has prevailed.
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Post by aj on Nov 7, 2003 15:37:16 GMT -5
Great job!
-AJ
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Post by Sultriness on Nov 7, 2003 15:47:59 GMT -5
Thanks it's my first  Sultry |
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Post by aj on Nov 7, 2003 19:09:18 GMT -5
You'd never know it. Nicely done. I like Haiku as an exercise because it helps you express yourself succinctly. Keep it up!
-AJ
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