Mountains can hear me wishing

Rainy poet Poetry warms the heart and saves the soul!!! Posts: 268	Mountains can hear me wishing Jun 16, 2003 23:40:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rainy on Jun 16, 2003 23:40:49 GMT -5 Now two days away Me wishing you were here now The mountains can hear -Kim
	You don't love him becuase he's beautiful, He's beautiful because you love him!!

burningepiphany poet Burning an epiphany finds her way thru, a beautiful creature of darkness Posts: 222	Mountains can hear me wishing Jun 17, 2003 19:42:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by burningepiphany on Jun 17, 2003 19:42:42 GMT -5 I really like your haikus, but perhaps you could use different phrasing sometime, like me wishing... maybe i'm wishing? well... they're good just being constructive... keep write ~B.E.
	As Socrates or Juliet's Romeo I'd rather die know with all I know To drink poison is much more sure Than to die at the hand's of the unjust or impure