caged
shows promise
Smile and be happy... THAT'S AN ORDER
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Post by caged on Jun 3, 2003 18:14:18 GMT -5
What can I do I want to help you but you won't let me you are afraid and you are scared and you don't know why I care you can't see how much a friend you are to me you say to me why do you care no one should care about me but all I will say is that if you need me I'll be there if you cry I'll comfort you and if you give up I'll keep giving for you
please talk to me
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Tiny
been around the block
***Everyone deserves to be loved***
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Post by Tiny on Jun 3, 2003 19:59:14 GMT -5
ok i'll talk excellently done darlin' couldn't have done it better myself Tiny
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Post by unburntflame on Jun 4, 2003 2:16:15 GMT -5
i love it! well written caged, u'd make a gr8 friend!
ubfl
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paxia
been around the block
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Post by paxia on Jun 5, 2003 10:24:06 GMT -5
I know what you mean!!! It sux when friends are sad like that...This poem is really good...I want myfriends to write me poems like that (Just kidding) keep up the good work!!!
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