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Jun 8, 2003 16:29:19 GMT -5
Post by Devi145 on Jun 8, 2003 16:29:19 GMT -5
Tears placed like soft dew,
Tipsy on ends of fresh grass
Tenderly blushed cheeks.
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Jun 9, 2003 16:36:09 GMT -5
Post by onemorething on Jun 9, 2003 16:36:09 GMT -5
i loved "tipsy". the poem was good, but that was the perfect adjective. good job. keep it up.
-ken
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Jun 12, 2003 23:08:34 GMT -5
Post by Restless on Jun 12, 2003 23:08:34 GMT -5
totally agree with ken........"tipsy" was a great choice for this! nice write and keep posting!
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