_leash_
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Post by _leash_ on Jun 22, 2004 12:40:00 GMT -5
this is not quite so much along the theme of nature, but it does give you some interesting imagery..
-inspiration-
pass me my scalpel,
i need to write a poem..
it shall be crimson.
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Post by melissa16 on Jun 22, 2004 13:29:22 GMT -5
hey, this is great, wow! and you're right, it does produce a a very, very interesting imagery  great write...! |
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_leash_
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Post by _leash_ on Jun 23, 2004 14:09:23 GMT -5
thank you.
i wanted to give an image of a poet with fresh ideas.. a poet that has had such a long spell without inspiration that they would be driven enough to carve their words into their own flesh.
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Post by aj on Jun 23, 2004 17:05:38 GMT -5
I like it. It's different. Nicely done, leash.
Don't worry about the format. We also have
free-form haiku as well.
Keep it up!
-AJ
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_leash_
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Post by _leash_ on Jun 24, 2004 16:01:12 GMT -5
I like it. It's different. Nicely done, leash. Don't worry about the format. We also have free-form haiku as well. thank you. i didnt mess up the sylables, did i? i checked a few times over and it seems right.. |
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